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Casey's New Experiences

Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2024 3:01 am
by furf
Been slowly chipping away at a story involving an innocent, affection-starved mouse boy making friends with Maddie and Jess. I'll post the future chapters in here as I write them, so far I only have the first chapter done.

I've attached RTF and TXT versions for anyone who wants them :winkrazz:

(Here's Casey's ref sheet btw! :grin: )
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► Show Spoiler : Chapter 1: The Friend

Re: Casey's New Experiences (CW: Cub)

Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2024 12:28 am
by ProbablyAlive

I enjoyed your story and I thought about criticizing it but then I thought about it and a lot of the stuff I read are from Asian authors that can stretch out a causal panty shot on the street in to a four page affair. So perhaps my insights would push into a direction that most people aren’t used to